A lover’s complaint

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These streets I walk, they call your name. 
Where my excursions have not been the same. 
These trees and the birds sing your song.
When it rains, they’d want us to come along.

These evening breezes whisper me by the ear,
About how they loved seeing us in pair.
These lonely moments begging for your presence to be felt.
But your frozen heart has yet to melt.

These eyes of mine dying to see your light.
These hands wanting to hold you tight.
These immense crowds fail to connect my call.
So I die every night, thinking of you, wanting to share it all.

It is when I can’t endure this pain.
I write it down simple and plain. 

A page I keep up every now and then,
What I call it, a lover’s complaint.

Jan 09, 2018
Ankit Thapa

 

Image credit earthroom

 

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      1. oks, I think I finally figured it out. And I think I know of 5 other bloggers. So I’ll do it tomorrow. I need to set the questions 🙂
        And once again thank you for nominating me.

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      1. Euta kura, you are just like me when it comes to writing, I mean katti dherai leknu hudo rahe cha. ki sab purano ho? I have like 40-50 poems., mero poems ko vault ma 🙂

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      2. Yes I write a lot. Can’t stop. In one year I had written over 1000 poems last year. Mero debut book of poetry ma, 245 poems cha. Yo haru purano haina. And this is my 4th blog. 🙂

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      3. Are you kidding me.?? That is a large number, its really sth that would be of next level to me. Ani I thought I write so much. Anyway, It was nice meeting you. Katti pachi koi sanga khulera boleko, so Im happy. 🙂

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      4. Ma ni testai ho, ajai maile ta sth like dairy jasto lekhera 2 choti chyatera fayleko chu, Now I regret that move 😦
        Im from kathmandu, tapai aauno bako cha yeta?

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      5. Maybe someday I’ll tell you about it. Whatever I write is my only getaway. Ani I think it applies to you too. you can read about me about me, mero blog ko intro section ma 🙂

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  1. When poems are written this beautifully, it makes you wonder if it’s a poem or a journal entry.

    What you have written is just as gorgeous as the picture accompanying it.

    I’ve felt this way many times over. It blows my mind how you were able to capture something so true so elegantly.

    I love it.

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    1. Its always nice finding someone sharing the same thought. I really appreciate you taking your time going through my poem, and for this motivating opinion.
      I just tried writing what I was going through, this being my only way out. Im glad you liked it.

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      1. It’s not all about effort, I think it’s also about the connection that you have with your mind and the soul. It really is that. And I’m pretty sure you’re aware of it.
        Thank you for your interest on my work. It really means a lot. I’m grateful to have a genuine reader like you.

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      2. The soul and mind is a connection that I cherish deeply. I always have and I yes I am very aware of how that is present in any form of creativity.

        You are welcome. I can say the same to you. It’s a true pleasure to have a fellow expressionist not just read my work and comments but to find meaning and depth in them. Thank you as well.

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  2. Despite your deepest thoughts and your wounding paper swords
    These words of yours are what I’d call a lover’s plea
    To be understood between the lines, to be truly heard
    And be loved for all that you are in your entirety!

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