Life right now so much fun
Come, catch up with me in this run.
Stay with me for all my turns
A beautiful sunrise awaits my dawn.
Gentle winds, guide me please
Flying high, my thirst for bliss.
Blown away, such gentle kiss
Harbored I am from the devil’s reach.
Life by now you know I run
From my own shadows, seeking the sun.
I’ll halt now if you too pause
I’ll let your dawn kiss my dusk.
Clement breeze, guide this sail
We’ll soar high, come what gale
Propelled by a communion so real
No devil can reach us even if we fail,
This poem is basically about happy aspects of life. This was my first collaboration.
I am thankful to Nandita for taking me in. You are an excellent writer who never fails to amuse me with your poetry.
cover image credit – joergip31
Ankit, a lovely poem and collaboration. Have a lovely day, Holly.
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Holly, Thank you for your words. That was so nice of you. Have a great day. 🙂
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You too!😊
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As i said in Nandita’s site…beautiful collaboration..
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Thank you so much. She is such a wonderful artist.
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You two are magic ❤
Beautiful collaboration 🙂
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Ssameera, thank you. Nandita has it not me. Im just a fan. 🙂
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Nandita casts her magical spell on everyone around her. ❤ Your verse mingled perfectly , isn't that a magic itself ? 😉
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Yeah kinda. Can you tell me which one is hers?? You’ve been following her and you adore her. So it must be an easy one.
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Last two are hers 🙂 She already told that on her blog. 😉 But I would have still known even if she hasn’t told. She is my favourite and love too ❤
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Oh noooooooo!!!!
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What happened ?
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My efforts in vain. lols.
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Hahaha..! 😛 better luck next time 🙂
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And you better be prepared. 🙂
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All set Ankit 😛 Get set go 🙂
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wow, you’re more excited than I am. So I will definitely do that again. I have a distinctive style of writing. Nandita on the other hand is unpredictable. That makes me an easy target.
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Hehe…! let’s see 🙂 Nandita is love and her poetry is of some other level. She is a blessing ❤
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Yeah im a fan of her poetry.
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She is my favourite 🙂
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Ohh I see.
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I love how this post has suddenly become about me. Lol. I love you both ❤
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Ssameera is..
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I love you more Nansy.♥
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She reads my poetry like it is her religion. ❤
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I know, im aware of it.
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This was written so well, your writing styles merged beautifully! I love the vivid imagery, I could visualize everything!!
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That brought a smile on my face. Im thankful .Im happy to have a reader like you.
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That was wonderful!!
This really hits. I know what it’s like to have a darkness try to chase you but you’re so happy and in love that it can never catch you.
That’s true happiness. Reading this helps put my own happiness in perspective. There’s a wonder in this poem that shines bright. Like a child playing in their own imagination, happiness isn’t an effort, it just is.
Beautiful!
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Rose, Im glad to see you here. I wrote the first two verse. I was overwhelmed with happiness when I wrote it. ‘True happiness’ Im glad you bought it. You absolutely nailed it.
Happiness can be short lived. I was able to capture this happiness with my pen like a photographer capturing that perfect shot.
Thank you Rose for sharing your thoughts. ( It felt too formal, lols, thank you part).
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Hahaha. You are very welcome! And trust me, you can feel the happiness in every word.
Are you saying your thank you felt to formal, or mine? Lol.
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Mine lols, I know you are a good reader. So you felt that. And, hey, Im working with something really sad today. 🙂
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It did seem a bit automated. Lol. But I didn’t mind it.
Sad????? Oh no! I hope everything’s okay. Are you alright?
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Everything’s okay. I just wsnted you to know. You sre my good friend. Thank you for your concerns.I will put it here tomorrow.
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Thank you for considering me a friend! And thank you for keeping me in the know.
I hope it isn’t too bad. You deserve hapiness. I’d hate for misfortune to find you. I’ll pray for you.
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Oh wow. I am speechless. I wish I could tell you how hapoy I am seeing that. Thank you so so much. 🙂
You are a nice person. I will always wish you well. Thank you.
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You are always very very welcome. 😊😊😉
Thank you.
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This poem, too, feels like a ray of sunshine and a breath of fresh air.
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Ohh I see. 🙂
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Beautiful poem.
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Shreya, thank you for the love. Im grateful.
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Nice…
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Aman, Thank you.
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you are welcome…:-)
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The art piece stands alone for me. It’s epic. The poem doesn’t seem to fit with the art, or does it? Anyways, that’s an inquiry i’m finding. Right now, I like visual art to be stand alone, for it is already scene waiting to be unfurled by a fertile and free imagination. Poems seem dishonorable to the moment as the depth of focal investment required for the art piece is very much available and real. I say, one or the other, but hey, that’s me!
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Hey thank you for the feedback, I appreciate that. This must be my first one with an irrelevant art. And you caught me. I’m glad you brought that. Many thanks.
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Well said. I look forward to reading more of your light.
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Wow man… beautifully expressed. 👍👍👍
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I am blessed to have readers such as you. Thanks man. It means a lot. 🙂
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You’re kind to say that, buddy. The truth is I like many others like reading you… keep up the good work.:-)
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Im flattered 🙂
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Such a nice poem👌👌
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Thank you so much.
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Very nice…
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Thanks 🙂
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You’re welcome Ankit😁
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Whenever I read such beautiful poems, I so wish I could write them too!
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Thank you for taking the time visiting my blog and for that beautiful comment. It means so much. 🙂
Comments like this can be so inspiring. I am glad to have you here on my blog 🙂
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Love it 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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