Poke me not, I live by the edge.
Save your efforts, I’ll be long gone before you figure this maze.
Love me not, I’ll turn you into a character of hate.
Do not argue, you are never winning this debate.
Do not rebel, don’t you try to complain.
Seal your lips, what they offer shall all be in vain.
Move on, I don’t want you to wait.
Embrace the fact, I no longer live the life of regret.
Keep away, I’m such an asshole.
Know this, I’m heartless, at times I could be really cold.
Acquiesce, or simply leave, before you start.
Hate me, for my words coming right from my heart.
I meant it, when I said, it is with you I wanted to walk a thousand mile.
But you failed to acknowledge, how all those bumps, twists and turns on my way up here, have left me fragile.
Beautiful, my friend.
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Thank you so much for that. 🙂
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heart-breaking words Ankit. so melancholic… it is this time we need others.xxx
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Your words are always comforting. Thanks man.
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Wonderful! I love the use of acquiesce, its so hard to incorporate the word without losing flow. You’ve done it well!
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oh wow, you saw that, I’m glad 🙂
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Superb work
Pls follow me and give your suggestion on my poetry:)
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I wish I could do that, but you have it in hindi. You know Im not familiar with that. I am really sorry for that. I am from Nepal. 🙂
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Wow! Such an intense emotion Ankit! Beautifully presented! 🙂
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Thank you Graci !!! I was just getting it off my chest making things clear and simple. 🙂
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That’s nice to know Ankit. Keep it going! 🙂
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I like this. Feels powerful. Feels raw.
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Thank you Abe. That was so nice of you. btw are you stoned? lols.
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Lmao. I might be. Wink, wink. No I’m not. Haha. Or am I? No. I don’t do drugs. Wait. Pot doesn’t count as drugs. Does it?
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I can’t tell that about the world but if you ask me, It never was and never will.
You know I write poetrys abt it. lols, but Im too scared to put it up here.
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Ouch.
Its insane how pain can be felt on both sides. It’s easy to tell that you’ve been hurt by the person you gave your heart to. And yet, those words pierce the heart of the offender as they fly like daggers.
The one that caused the pain receives it in return.
There’s so much feeling here.
It’s stripped of all glamour and reveals a harsh, dark side and is yet somehow still beautiful.
You never cease to amaze, Ankit. Perfect.
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First off I really appreciate you being here, taking the time to read my shit even in times like this. I would also like to apologise for not being able to keep up with yours.
You see, I regret this poem, but its up here already, the damage is done, and I just discovered thst. “You killed me with your poem.” That is what I got. All thanks to my lines.
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Wait wait, what!?
You’re saying the person you wrote this about read it and is offended by it???
Do you remember what I said about regret??? The feelings you had were raw and real. It was genuine and not sugar coated in the least. Regardless of how it came across, it was the truth. NEVER EVER APOLOGIZE FOR SPEAKING THE TRUTH!!!
You may feel bad for hurting her with your words, but you were hurt too and should therefore be allowed to express your pain. Maybe it was something you could have just shared with her, but you’re a writer Ankit. It’s what you do. You don’t hold back. Especially when dealing with pain.
You’ve got to know something Kit, regret doesn’t wear well on anyone. Be strong, like you told me to be. It may be done now, but you must stand behind your words and actions. Always.
I have faith in you. Keep faith in yourself.
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wow wow, that there was precious, those words were so sweet. You speak the truth, I felt so comfortable with that. I may not have words to appreciate you but I have numbers, and here it goes, thank you so much x 10000000 tjmes for that. Thank you my dearest friend. 🙂
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Hahaha. You are very welcome my dear!!!
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And don’t worry about keeping up with my blog. It’s fine. Truly. Thank you.
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Painful and punching words….Nice poem
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Thank you for reading my poem. 🙂
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. This is beautifully sad Ankit. I hope this is poetry and nothing more, you deserve the very best.
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Holly, it was so nice of you. Unfortunately it was more than that, but things are looking good now. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and your concerns. Thank you 🙂
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Oh that’s fully of agony!! Very artistically expressed!
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Thank you Soumya for that wonderful compliment. 🙂
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wow thanks for the nomination. I appreciate it so much. Thank you. You know I may not do that right away. I have 8 pending nominations 2 and Ill do that. Will that be okay?
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You too, have a good day!!
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Thanks 🙂
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Always welcome.
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Did you feel it or just wrote this?? I love it
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I wish I could do thst. I’d be writing fictions.
Thanks for the love. 🙂
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This is so poignant. The ending is a bit sad, but so is love many times. I hear you! 🙂
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Thank you so much Aquileana. I appreciate that. Endings are always sad. Lols.
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This broke me down completely
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I wish I could’ve written that, you know.
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