Our ways go separate
They cross like vines.
Been craving for something
Which couldn’t be mine.
The story ends, days and months old
Cannot revive, the life you stole.
Love the pain, torments my soul
My big heart with a bigger hole.
Love from the will of iron I forged
Reimbursed by suffering, sadness overdosed
Question to self, what could be worse
As she walked by with no remorse
Fruitless endeavors, criminal of hers
Oh lord! You’ve blessed me with a curse.
Image credits – MabelAmber
Beautiful!
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Thanks man. Wish you good night 🙂
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Wish you good night, buddy! 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Welcome!
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🙂
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👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank you Zankhana 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you for reading my poem 🙂
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You’re welcome
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🙂
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Getting the feels…
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Im glad to hear that 🙂
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This is beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate it 🙂
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Oh my gosh this is wowza!!!! I couldn’t relate more with this poem…doesn’t even sad that I could relate haha….this poem just made my day!
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I appreciate your words, I am really happy to see your response. Im glad I could do all that. Thank you Tapasi. 🙂
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I like it… Thumbs up…👍👍🤘✌
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Thank you my friend, I always appreciate your feedback.
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Broken. That’s the only word I can come up with is broken.
It’s a tragedy filled with so much love. It saddens me yet your blatant description of what is and what was, leaves me eerily optimistic. As if you understand and accept reality and all that’s left to do is move on.
Good stuff Kit.
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Thank you for your words, hehe, I always appreciate your, what should I call it a review? But this was an old one. I wrote it like a year ago.
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Sorry for being late to the party. Lol.
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Hehe 🙂
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Bruh ♥️
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Happy to see that.
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“You’ve blessed me with a curse” — now THIS is one line that’ll stay with me.
Loved the poem! Keep ’em coming. 🙂
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You know it should have been “You have blessed ME with a curse.” I just saw that. I should be more careful. Its an old one. I wrote it a year ago.
Anyway I appreciate your words. Thank you 🙂
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I kinda understood it with the “me” omitted, but I guess it is indeed clearer with the “me” there. Actually, when I first read that line, I thought it went, “You’re blessed with a curse,” which is a different message altogether, but I think is an interesting idea as well.
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Thst was a disastar from my side. I thank you for those kind words. If not for your comment It would have gone unseen. I am grateful. 🙂
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My pleasure! 🙂
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I love this piece. It’s raw, uncouth. “Can not revive, the life you stole… As she walked by with no remorse.” *chills
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Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read my piece. I like it when someone takes my line this way and comments on those lines. 🙂
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