They say “give it to time, everything shall heal.”
Upheavel, my dead wish, deep resentment to that feel.
For too long I’ve been following the wise.
On a false hope, one fine day my sun shall rise.
The sin of a misplaced hope, everything’s so deceiving.
Check my pulse, check my signs, would you consider me living?
The reality kicks hard, I am reminded in every move.
So I stay dead, dead under my roof.
Besieged by treachery, I writhe in discomfort.
Send an emissary, I was dearly holding onto my north.
For a new hope that was misplaced.
But hey, I’ll be easily replaced.
Murder my dreams, poison my wishes
You could try but I’m never collecting these pieces.
A chilling touch I embrace every February.
Scheduling life desolate and solitary.
Here’s the first part – Of hopes & February
Hmmm. The poem was beautiful, but can’t guess what’s going on in your mind. Love and light!
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Hi Rishhu, this one is about my hopes in February. I have series of bad memories with this month. Everything looks ominous from here. Around this time of year I am always blessed with the bad vibes. To me Feb brings chaos and by the end It leaves me hopeless and depressed. I thought it would be different this year but I was wrong. So I decided to write about it.
I hope that will help you with my poem.
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Thanks for the explanation, buddy. Hmmm. Okay! 😊
Hopes and dreams! They should and shouldn’t end. Try staying positive, man! Godbless.
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Thanks man, for your words and for your time for my poem. I wish you a wonderful night.
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Same here.
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Pragya, so you hate feb?
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I f****** hate Feb😭
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Oh I see, we all have this. But Feb is almost over 🙂
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Even this “almost over” sucks🤒
Hehe😝
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Don’t worry nothing lasts forever.
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Haanji. (Yes, sir) ( Not literally, I am bad at this haha)🤒
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Haha, you’ll be okay, be strong.
If you can’t get it.
Then you gotta hate it.
That is how I bounce back. I have this on one of my poem.
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🤒🤒Hmm. Send me the link.
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Profound and utterly beautiful. Healing is a difficult thing. Great write my friend.
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” Healing is a difficult thing.” I appreciate that so much.
Thank you Andrew, you motivate me with every visit. 🙂
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Smiling. Have a good one.
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You too 🙂
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Wonderful. Have also nominated you for teh Liebster Award:
pvcann.com/2018/02/22/liebster-award-noomination
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I am honored. Thank you for nominating me, I’ll be there in a moment.
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Took me two days around work
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I’ll do my best. 🙂
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“Murder my dreams, poison my wishes
You could try but I’m never collecting these pieces”
~ these lines!! Strong and lovely.
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oh wow, thank you for taking those lines 🙂 I appreciate that so much. I am delighted.
And good luck for your 30 day challenge, you are almost done. I guess it was your 28th today. 🙂
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I appreciate that you paid attention even to that, hehe! Thank you, and keep writing! 🙂
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haha, You wanted it to be consecutive but you were gone for a while. See, I’m aware of that too. hehe thanks 🙂
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Cool! 😀
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You continue to amaze me with your writing. Great work!
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I am smiling. That was really inspiring. Thank you for such wonderful response. It really helps. 🙂
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Love the poem but hope you’re okay.. 🙂
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I am okay, just filling these blank spaces makes me feel better.
Thanks Graci, I appreciate your concern. 🙂
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Glad to know you’re okay.. but writing helps in releasing our sad emotions,so just keep writing 🙂
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It surely dose. It helps so much with the emotions.
Thanks again 🙂
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Love how unique your writing style is…
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I appreciate that so much. I am experimenting new styles. Thank you for taking the time reading and analyzing my contents.
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God-damn, dope!
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Thank you so much. This means so much.
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Great blog 🍷🎈🎊
Do gibe a look at mine https://iamjatinnanda.wordpress.com/2018/02/25/turning-old/
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Thank you.
It’s done.
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Fabulous, even if it’s dull & grey in its subject!
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Thank you Kunal, for your thoughts. I appreciate that.
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How do you manage to do this!! This is sooo deep and touching!! I could not resist myself reading it again and again… clearly reflects true pain…..Keep writing!
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I’ll take that as a rhetorical question.
I am so glad to see your comment. That was contagious I just read it again and again 🙂
Thank you Soumya for such inspiring words.
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😊😊
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beautifully written. I ve got nothing against february but this year, I m so glad it is finally over.
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Me too but the damage has been done 🙂
Thank you for appreciating my work 🙂
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Hope keeps us going…I am absolutely certain that one day you will agree with this – “one fine day my sun shall rise” 🙂
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I could feel the agony 😦 It was dark & beautiful
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Thank you Myrtle. That is the best compliment and the biggest asset of an artist. Being able to connect with his audience through his art.
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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