This is me making amends. My poem Acquiesce fragility was a downright insanity. But since it was raw, I decided not to pull it off. I am expressing my sincere apology through this poem and assuring certain things. 🙂
P.S – She lives on my north.
Coming to you back and forth.
I may stumble but I’m dearly focused on you, my north.
Love shall fill our days, I’ll make it our elixir before we part our ways.
Rejoice, relive and do believe, blessed I shall be with your shadow lingering on my surface.
You stand there, you live amongst the clouds.
I stand here ready to blow my heart with my final breath if it clears your doubts.
Hold on there, hold onto me dear, missing me, should you ever cry,
Read this poem, go through my lines, listen to my song, just like a mother, singing it to her boy. I present to you A lover’s lullaby.
Beautiful 👌
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Thank you Abhishek. 🙂
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Wow its so beautiful Ankit! Really amazing!
BTW my exams are finished, so I’ll for your email 🙂
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Oh good to see you back Tapasi. Welcome 🙂
I hope you did well.
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Mr. Poet, this is one of the best take on love so far on this platform! It was a delight to read your poem. Again, enchanting! 🤗
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It is my absolute pleasure having a poetess like you here on my site.
Thank you Poetess, im glad, you are always there with your kind words. Really means a lot.
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You’re so generous, Mr. Poet🙂
I’ll always be here to praise your work, you deserve it!
Take care, Mr. Poet🙂
Waiting for your next wonderful creation 🙂🙂
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woaww, that was heart warming. I am in your debt Pragya. I mean it.
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🤗🤗 You’re sweet, Mr. Poet☺
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you too. 🙂
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🤗🤗
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Beautifully written.
If you don’t mind, we would love it if you could register on our site and share your content there.
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Hi there, thank you for your offer. I appreciate that. I am humbled. So I’ll be there shortly.
I’m just curious, what are you? Why would you want me to join?
I know of sites that allows writers to share their contents, here on WP. I just want to know if you’re similar.
Thanks
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We are similar in a way but we also select an author every month to be the author of the month whose profile is showcased on the home page of our website for entire month.
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Sorry I came late, I just registered.
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Thank you.
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This is absolutely beautiful. Love the blow your heart line. Amazing.
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You know Andrew, I am so glad to hear that. Man, that means so much. It tells me that I have done a good job with my words here, Thanks a lot.
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You did a great job
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I had to do that, I was trying to make amendments with this one. 🙂
Have a wonderful day 🙂
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Thanks. You too
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Lovely lullaby👌
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Thank you Sana 🙂
Oh wait, whhat should I call you?
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My name is sana,😯
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Oh I am so sorry , I edited that instantly, forgive me for that.
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It’s absolutely ok….
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🙂
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Which name do you like mahin or sana?
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I think you shouldn’t be asking me that. Its not about what I like. Its your name. So I’ll leave it there.
I’m taking Sana for your first and Mahin for your surname. So I’ll go with Sana. Is that okay?
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I hope ‘she’ appreciates your amendment. 😉 This was beautiful.
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Me too, I hope the same. Im wondering what if…. But anyway she will. Maybe she appreciates this more, so much more than what I expected. She must be basking somewhere.
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Nice!! ☺
Our hunt for definitions and meanings are never ending. We always desire to provide something meaningful and yearn for the same.
We build a fence around us and only look outside it to compare. But don’t realise the treasure we possess within.
Unveiling such realisations, opening chests of such treasures,
HemasSphere brings to you 1 of such series. Focus is always on realism.
To the world where I belong and to me where the world resides.
Listen; don’t just hear! – is the 1st of the series.
Would be honoured by your visit and presence on my page and would be appreciate your views.
I can be followed on
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Happy reading.
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That was something interesting. You know I do realize and acknowledge the treasure I posses. I had a nice discussion on that topic with a fellow blogger. And I always try to deliver the same. I love that message, we are unique and we are special.
I’ll be there on your blog asap. Thanks.
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HemasSphere published it’s 2nd post today. 2nd of the series. Read it to know more.
Speak, don’t just talk!
hemassphere.wordpress.com/2018/02/09/speak-dont-just-talk/
You will be able to connect to my 1st post too.
Would be honoured by your visit and presence on my page and would be appreciate your views.
I can be followed on
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fb.me/HemasSphere
@hemassphere -Twitter
Happy reading.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This poem has such elegance to it! It was wonderful to read!!
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You know I am so glad to hear that. Thanks for mentioning that. It means so much. 🙂
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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🙂
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That’s real love. To say that she’s your north, is powerful. No matter how lost you may seem, you’ll always know exactly how to find her, day or night.
What really gets me though is “blow my heart with my final breath if it clears your doubts”. This is amazing. And it says so much. You are willing to die in order to make her see how much you love her. Its real love. Not just infatuation or lust. But true, genuine love. Going to the ends of the earth; that’s when you know it’s real.
Oh Kit, I think you’ve just inspired a new piece for me to write! Thank you. Lol.
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woooooooow, everytime I read your comment. I get that wonderful feeling. You are amazing. You know you are always spot on with your summary of my poetry. I am so so grateful.
Thank you my darling. You know I don’t have words to describe this feeling that I get as its result.
I inspired you, oh really??? Im so glad, keep coming lols. I’ll be waiting. You know I can’t wait to see that. But you take your time. I know you’ll bring an excellent one.
Thank you for everything. I always appreciate your presence here. 🙂
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Haha haha. As always, you are welcome.
And yeahhhh. I’ve got some ideas floating around because of this. Lol.
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I see, I’ll just wait patiently then.
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Yup yup
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This is beautiful Ankit! 🙂
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Thanks Graci, that was sweet. I always appreciate your presence. 🙂
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Well, you do deserve to have a compliment. Keep up the good work! 🙂
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That was so nice of you. Thanks again. Have a super wonderful day ahead. 🙂
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Have a great day ahead!! 🙂
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So lovely Ankit…
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Oh wow, its you. Whats with the new blog?? Anyway, good to see you buddy.
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Yes, that’s me. Well, my site got entangled in some technical mess. Had to create a new one. This one is going to be active now.
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Oh I see. I wish you luck with the new one buddy. 🙂
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Thanks man!
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So poetic, and so beautiful, Ankit! Relished it like a wine! 😊
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Thanks a lot man. I appreciate everything. Feels good to have such comment
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Welcome!
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🙂
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Nice ome
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Thank you. 🙂
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LOVED IT😍
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Thank you 🙂
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This is so wonderful (of course it is, if it’s you). Such an articulated use of words, that convey exactly the context that needs to be portrayed. Well done!
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Of course its me. Thank you for reviewing . I appreciate that so much. 🙂
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Gorgeous
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Thank you 🙂
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This is my favorite! Full of undying love!! Well done, Ankit ☺️
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It is actually comments like this, thst fuels me. I am in your debt. I always appreciate your presence. Thank you Rae. Im sorry for being late.
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What a lovely love poem.
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Thanks man, I am motivated. 🙂
I wish you a wonderful day.
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Sm2 u
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🙂
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Beautiful
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It is thanks a lot 🙂
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Amazing blog! Is your theme custom made or did you download it from somewhere? A theme like yours with a few simple adjustements would really make my blog jump out. Please let me know where you got your theme. Thank you
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Hi Alyce, the theme thst I used is Baskerville 2. Its a free theme. I did some customization with it. I hope.it helps.
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Intense….
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Thank you for reading my poetry 🙂
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Hyy, I’ve nominated you for versatile blogger award
https://lilmunchkinn.wordpress.com/2018/03/11/versatile-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much for nominating me. I am sorry I came late. I’ll be on your blog with my answers shortly.
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Haha that’s okay, no probs!! 😊
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beautiful post
I have now opened a new blog for Hindi poetry. https://wp.me/p9kizn-5Kv Now you will find all Hindi poems there
At https://atrangizindagieksafar.com, only English poems will be found only.
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Thanks for the info
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🙂 🙂
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Hi there, how have you been?
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I have been good. How have you been?
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Im good, very good.
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good
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🙂
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🙂
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🙂
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good
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