Liquid silver ignites
In a flurry of ice.
She dances in the moonlight
Under the starry night.
But the fire within
Melts her and her sin,
And the rippling water
Slowly devours her.
And as she drowns,
The violin, he crowns.
Cruelty fading at last,
For a piece of the past.
Giving up for he had a hundred ways
This fine day she came at a slower pace
Suffocated void, filling emptiness,
Bringing this simle, killing his deadliness.
Cursive lines closing in on me,
Diana’s light is all I see
Mutually healing, always the same
Her sweetest call for my name.
Under these skies, there lies nothing new,
Somehow I believe in my strength to carry you.
Take my hands, let’s jump together,
In deepening swirls of feathers.
And the world will glisten
As we sit to listen
Like birds watching explosions
With screaming emotions.
This is a collab done with SUGAR AND BLACKBERRIES
A beautiful lady with a beautiful soul who has been very supportive to me. She has been a very good friend and helping me with my songs and my art outside of WP.
Also I would like to add a link to a demo I did today on my 420 hour.
It isn’t complete. To me it sounds different now. That strumming on 00.07, Dose it sound a bit different? By different, I don’t mean sounding OFF. I would love to hear your thoughts on that. It would mean so much 🙂
Beautiful collab. Bravo to the two of you
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Thank you my friend 🙂
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👍👍👍
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Hello my Prog friend.,Would you mind checking my demo song that I have here. I would mean so much .
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I couldn’t hear it because of low connection. It gets interrupted. But I did get a gist. It really seems beautiful. Makes me want to play music, which I can’t. Can you give me the link to your YouTube, or wherever you post these? Also, the starry night with the little figure looks beautiful with this musice…. Lonesome….
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Here is the link to my Youtube Channal – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUK0Ub157NA
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Now I could here it well on YouTube. Subscribed and liked 😊😊😊
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You made me so happy 🙂
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I’m really glad if so 😊😊😊
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Thank you I will carry on with this song then.
Actually this art was for my other song. But since I didn’t have an extra piece of art. I decided to use it with this one.
Thank you once again 🙂
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You really don’t have to thank me 😊
Of course carry on! Waiting for more!
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You are so kind. 🙂
I will complete it in a few days.
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Yay! That’s great 😊😊😊
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So well done, both of you. Delightful!
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Thank you Nandita. 🙂
🙂
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You’re most welcome. It was a beautiful collab.
Timile comment garnu choreko?
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Choreko matlab???
Ki chodeko?
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Lol. Chodeko yes.
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Last time maile k offer gareko thiye? Ma geet banaidim if you’re feeling bad bhanda. Afu le reply gardaina.
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Apuii. Go back and read that convo. Maile that would be nice bhaneko thiye.
Anyway, aba comment garnu chodeko sodheko.
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reply gareko thiyou ra? Maile dekhina ani you know ni malai sano kura le ni kasto huncha,
Ok ma comment garna aaya hai ta.
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Yes gareko thiye. That convo was on Andrew’a blog I think.
Anyway, I look forward to those. Matlab comment bhaneko. Lol.
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Okay, yo tala bhako demo check gara ta, malai yo strumming halka strange lagyo ki yestai thik cha?? Yehi sodhna lai rakheko ho actually. Yo ajai complete chaina.
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Suney. I’m not a master in music. Lol. Sounds really good to me.
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Ahh, ma ajai tesma add garchu. 🙂
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Ok. I found it! It’s beautiful. Both the poem and the music! great collaboration!
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The demo is also a collab btw. 🙂
Thank you I appreciate your kind words means so much
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You are welcome. Beautiful songs, poetry, and painting!
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hahaa
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I ain’t kidding 🙂
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Okay, I think I will continue this song with that strumming. 🙂
Thanks again. 🙂
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A beautiful poem and collaboration.
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Thank you Holly. 🙂
Bur Did you mean poem and song?
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sorry for my typo. I have been doing it everywhere. I need to be careful.
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Yes.
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oh thank you Holly. 🙂
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Very beautiful Ankit^^. Nice collaboration. The poem the painting and the music all together tell a story.
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Oh I thank you for the appreciation my friend.
It means so much. I owe you a big one. 🙂
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Fine work on the poem and song, well done my friend.
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Thank you so much my friend. 🙂
I appreciate your visits.
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THis was such fine collaboration! *Claps*
Great lines!
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Thank you rishhuu 🙂
Did you disable comments on your previous post? I could not reply to that.
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Yup! There’s a reason, re. 😊 Will open the comment section real soon in the newer posts.
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I see 🙂
Be well my friend. 🙂
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Great work friend….You are very talented, continue to shine!!!!
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Thank you so much for reading and listening to my demo. 🙂
Btw, I replied to your email.
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Okz, will check it out.
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Sure.
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Awesome!!!
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Thank you so much. Means so much. 🙂
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NP!
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Lovely… the words as well as the music… keep it up… :))
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Thank you so much Sundaram. 🙂
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I’ve been enjoying your blog! Therefore, I wanted to let you know that I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. Congratulations!!!. It’s completely optional to take part, but can be a great way to promote you blog.😊😊
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Hi, thank you for enjoying my blog and for nominating me. Actually I have never done awards. But since you have nominated me, I’ll visit you and have my answers there.
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Yeah you should definitely try!😊
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The verses are moving, the painting is beautiful, the chords are lovely! Great collaboration you two 🙂
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Oh thank you Graci 🙂
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You are welcome Ankit. 🙂
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Hey!!! The poem You Two wrote is SOOO beautiful!!! I love it! I have to come back tonight, after work to listen to the song as my boyfriend is still sleeping! But I’ll be back! Cheers! 🙂
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I see, thank you Katy, This is just a demo. I will play play play and play with it. Untill I get it right i made some changes. But you can tell me how this is, later when you listen to it.:)
And I wish you a bright sunny day
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Hey! This song is really cool! I like how there’s all this sweet music that rambles dancing through the cords that always return. Theme reincarnation….like the soul always returning to a body. Peaceful…lovely. Thanks!!! 🙂
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Thank you Katy, I appreciate your words 🙂
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Splendid. Love the collaboration and loved the theme
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wow, thank you so much 🙂
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My pleasure
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Another lovely collab, liked this more and the demo is great.
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I appreciate you visiting me . Thanks man.
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