Stop me dead on my track.
Play it clean stab me from the back
Divide me by the night
Eclipse my moon, take my light
Contort the judgement make it right
Over the horizon, away from my sight.
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This is my art for my next song/track.
Farewell
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Despite my deepest thoughts 
Beautiful Kit! This is just, wow. I love it.
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Thank you my friend. Long time no see. I hope everything is good with you.
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You’re welcome love!! I’m sorry I’ve been out of contact. I’m fine. How are you?
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Glad to hear that. Im doing well. Life isn’t bad. And I started doing songs.
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So I’ve seen!!! You and I have yet to complete our collab. It’s my fault though. I’ve been tirelessly busy. Forgive me. I’m glad you’re doing well. It feels good to know that you’re up instead of down. You had me worried there for a minute.
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Its okay, I haven’t recorded that yet. And this is fiction, I’ve been building their love and now this. I’ll use their story on my song. š
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You’re amazingly talented. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with.
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Thank you my dear friend. š
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Of course!
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This is a breathtaking poem! “Divide me by the night”. Such a pleasure to read great poetry!
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Great poetry?? That would be overkill. But I appreciate it SPF.
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No, it is not am overkill. Those are fabulous lines!
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Your comment was on my spam, you should see if its happening on other blogs as well. š
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This is a brilliant form of writing. I admire your honesty and your profound emotion. Truly remarkable. I hope you could follow my blog, maybe you could be inspired as well. Thank you! š
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Means so much.
I will visit you shortly. š
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Thank you. I hope you could follow me as well. yey!
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Sure thing š
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You have tremendous talent Ankit, both in expression and art. Love this!
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Thank you so much Holly, such inspiring comment. I would say the same about your poem, especially the longing ones. š
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Thank you dear Ankit, lovely comment.
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You’re welcome š
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I would recognize your art even without your name ^^, very beautiful one . Looking forwards for what s next š
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oh I know why, but I just separated those two characters. I am thinking of doing slides with this, like the one I did on Dreamscape. Thank you Antsa. š
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Cool one Ankitšš love it. And the art is mysteriously awesome.
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. š
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Ur welcome āŗļø all the best for the upcoming track šš
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Thanks again. You have a wonderful time ahead. š
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Beautiful art. Really interesting
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Thank you, means so much. š
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You are welcome
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Nice one Ankit. Keep it up!!!
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Thank you for visiting me. I will visit your blog soon. š
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Sure Ankit np š
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Reminds me of the song Lullaby by Blackfield. Beautiful
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You know what?? I did this while I was listening to Lullaby and Collapse the Light into earth.
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Wow I guessed kind of right! Amazing art work and waiting eagerly for the music šš
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Thank you so much. The song is almost done.. I’ll make it something like Dreamscape.
And I’m waiting for your art, the fiction was great. š
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Welcome š. Waiting patiently š
Thanks a ton š will try to post another soon
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Wow, intense!
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Thank you. š
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My pleasure š
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Another remarkable poetry! Short and powerful. The digital art is great too. Waiting to map this with the next track š
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I did the track, just not happy with my mixing. It sounds horrible. I think I will need to redo that again. That can be so discouraging.
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What you think horrible may not quite be so, others may like it but again self satisfaction is important š
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Yes exactly, self satisfaction is important. š
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This is written so beautifully. Such clever writing
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Thanks bro.
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My pleasure
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Your title gave me a shock. Melancholic poetry. Loved your art. š
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Really? I did not see it that way until now, thank you Myrtle for letting me know. š
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Nice artwork there, Ankit! š
Good luck for the upcoming song!
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Thank you so much bro š
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Already in love!
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Thank you MVS.
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WOW. Powerful. I mean!!! And really cool picture. It fits the flow of Your words perfectly. Ah. It left me feeling like I’d accidentally walked in on a very private, uncomfortable moment. Which is actually really cool! Cool beans and Cheers! Looking forward to the music! š
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oh that was my 2 characters breaking things up I mixed fiction with reality. I’m sorry if I made you uncomfortable. š¦
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Oh! NO! Not at all!!! I figured it was a fictional story but it was an effective one! It moved me emotionally….which is pretty rockin!!!
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I get it. That means so much š
Thanks a lot. š š š
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Absolutely! š
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Beautifully done..where is the track
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Song long farewell, thats the track.
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