Dark was her heart but now I see her color
Despite her warnings, I’ve fallen for her.
This calling. I find it hard to ignore
This tempting heart asks for more.
Her beauty I try to defend
To be taken by some other in the end.
A journey of a hundred mile
A thousand death on her radiant smile.
As she paints the sunshine on her face
A prophecy arrives, our fate sealed in a different place.
Her daggers have pierced me deep
Her memories as souvenir on which I shall weep.
Despite my deepest thoughts 
Reblogged this on A Tangle of Weeds and commented:
I better shut up..
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🙂
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Why?
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Just because 🙂 silence is golden.
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Yep.
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Hey, thanks for stopping by.
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Beautiful! Great wordsmanship–is that a word? Lol! Well done.
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I’m flattered, thanks for that. I have no idea if it exists or not, but I guess you just invented it, which itself is a great wordsmanship.
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Absolutely incredible! I love reading your work!!
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Thank you, I am really glad you enjoyed it. That there really helps. Thanks again. 🙂
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You’ve been nominated
https://thestoriesinbetween.com/2018/01/15/dont-hate-appreciate-award/
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Oh wow, thanks for that. 😉
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Of course. I really enjoy your writing, thank you for sharing it.
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I am so grateful for that. Thank you so much. i really appreciate it.And yes do I need to post it? With my own nominees?
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Yeah, repost with your nominations. It’s a good way to share what others have done.
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Oks I will definitely do that. But I need some time. I have one other pending.
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The passion with which you write, the emotions that blaze, make me realize so much more than what I already do. I know that you know that this is much more than what we both could have expected on a cold winter day in this planet rogue while we were still hung up over promises kept. I love your writing and I mean it with all my dark-coloured heart.
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This is really motivating. What an honor it is, such poetic praise. That made me feel special.
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hey ankit that is beautiful 🙂 nice to meet you as a blogger
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hey there, I’m really glad that found it beautiful, I really appreciate it. Thank you and nice to meet you too.
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your welcome ankit 🙂
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🙂
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your petry is tentalizing and very beautiful i like your writings.
do you read my poems posts pl read my poems and leave som comment ,a valuable one
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I’m honoured to have this attention. I really am. Thank you so much for that commet.
Yes I read one of your poem recently. And I liked it, I even shared it with my co-worker who sat next to me.
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Thanks Ankit .God bless you.
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I’ll be there to check that poem of yours again.
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wow.
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