Planet Rogue


I still see you in my darkest night.
Shining there, you look so bright.
A reluctant glimpse, on where I used to stare.
Call me a fugitive of this beautiful glare.

Morning tides, they are here​ to wash you away.
Distant skyline, welcomes your stay.
A sudden feeling of cold into my heart
This being the time where we part.

Residing somewhere in this vast space.
Within me lies my desolate emptiness.
With my broken self I often think of who we are.
I could be your farthest planet, you could be my closest star.

Within cosmic dust, I shall be found.
Always longing to fall for your ground..
Hundreds of thousand years of grace,
I shall finally arrive at your place.


Image credits  kellepics
Special thanks to SouthPawPoet



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  2. Incredible. Love knows no bounds. It weighs heavily on us and seems as large and grandiose as the universe.

    I love how you capture that with planets. Its so appropriate. There’s pain here, but also a sense of appreciation. Like “Thank you for allowing me to feel this pleasure even if it ends in pain”.

    But pain only lasts a moment. Happiness can last a life time if you let it.

    This is amazing Kit. Sticking to your true style, we can all feel your wonder.

    Thank you for sharing.

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    1. First off, I appreciate you taking time going through this. I was actually Inspired by a/my fellow poet, SouthPawPoet on Medium.

      I am really satisfied with my work here. I rarely go through writer’s block, its because I write my heart and I am a thinker, I guess it would have been a different scenario, if it was for fiction. Anyway when I do (writer’s block), I take cover under my Planet Rogue. This is special for me.

      Thank you for bringing planets and my style here, I really appreciate my readers coming up with that.

      I am aware, nothing last forever, I am done with my pain here 🙂

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