I still see you in my darkest night.
Shining there, you look so bright.
A reluctant glimpse, on where I used to stare.
Call me a fugitive of this beautiful glare.
Morning tides, they are here to wash you away.
Distant skyline, welcomes your stay.
A sudden feeling of cold into my heart
This being the time where we part.
Residing somewhere in this vast space.
Within me lies my desolate emptiness.
With my broken self I often think of who we are.
I could be your farthest planet, you could be my closest star.
Within cosmic dust, I shall be found.
Always longing to fall for your ground..
Hundreds of thousand years of grace,
I shall finally arrive at your place.
Image credits kellepics
Special thanks to SouthPawPoet
Beautiful poem.
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Thank you.
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Nice One
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Thank you so much.
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Souls meet in ways mysterious
Fathomable only to those who are serious
About the workings of the universe
Under cosmic cauldron, our verses merge
More later la?…
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Oks
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Ani I really appreciate it. I mean it.
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I will devour your work.
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But I need it here, so pls dont or else It will all be gone, If you do so.
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Haha. So cute.
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OMG..! This is soo beautiful. ♥
Perfect. 🙂
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Hi Ssameera, I’m thankful. That was so kind of you.
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Wow. 🌟
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Thank you, somewhat similar to the one you have.
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Reblogged this on POETRY LAND and commented:
I Love This Poem
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Thanks for the love.
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Incredible piece of writing…. Liked it. 🙂
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Thanks man, I really appreciate it. Those kind words. Thank you again. 🙂
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Incredible. Love knows no bounds. It weighs heavily on us and seems as large and grandiose as the universe.
I love how you capture that with planets. Its so appropriate. There’s pain here, but also a sense of appreciation. Like “Thank you for allowing me to feel this pleasure even if it ends in pain”.
But pain only lasts a moment. Happiness can last a life time if you let it.
This is amazing Kit. Sticking to your true style, we can all feel your wonder.
Thank you for sharing.
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First off, I appreciate you taking time going through this. I was actually Inspired by a/my fellow poet, SouthPawPoet on Medium.
I am really satisfied with my work here. I rarely go through writer’s block, its because I write my heart and I am a thinker, I guess it would have been a different scenario, if it was for fiction. Anyway when I do (writer’s block), I take cover under my Planet Rogue. This is special for me.
Thank you for bringing planets and my style here, I really appreciate my readers coming up with that.
I am aware, nothing last forever, I am done with my pain here 🙂
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Beautiful. I am very happy for you!
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