These streets I walk, they call your name.
Where my excursions have not been the same.
These trees and the birds sing your song.
When it rains, they’d want us to come along.
These evening breezes whisper me by the ear,
About how they loved seeing us in pair.
These lonely moments begging for your presence to be felt.
But your frozen heart has yet to melt.
These eyes of mine dying to see your light.
These hands wanting to hold you tight.
These immense crowds fail to connect my call.
So I die every night, thinking of you, wanting to share it all.
It is when I can’t endure this pain.
I write it down simple and plain.
A page I keep up every now and then,
What I call it, a lover’s complaint.
Jan 09, 2018
Ankit Thapa
Image credit earthroom
This is beautiful!
Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for finding it beautiful. 🙂
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Hi! I’ve nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award! I’d love if you would accept the nomination!
https://wordsfromadaria.wordpress.com/2018/01/12/mystery-blogger-award/
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M still figuring it out. I’ll be back once m done going through it. with queries 😀
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Sure! 😀
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Ok I’m in. Do I need to repost the entire thing on my blog? with 5 nominees and 3 things about me?
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Yes, although you can nominate any number of people you want, and you have to ask them any five questions!
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ok I’ll do it. I need some time to think of 5 other bloggers and question. I just started here 2 weeks ago. Thanks for coming up this wonderful idea.
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Yeah, take your time since there’s no such time limit.
It really was a great idea, whoever came up with it.
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oks, I think I finally figured it out. And I think I know of 5 other bloggers. So I’ll do it tomorrow. I need to set the questions 🙂
And once again thank you for nominating me.
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Definitely.
It was my pleasure, nominating you!
Thank you for accepting the nomination 🙂
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ankit… should be a lover’s complaint grammatically. the poem is lovely.
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I appreciate that, I was just wondering that. Since its a poem idk but I’ll take your advice. Thank you man.
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welcome my friend, as your english is so good, I thought you like to know.
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Im glad I have you for that. Im just a learner. 🙂
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Amazing
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Thanks for that 🙂
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Dammi, Ankit. So poignant and wistful. Nepali bolnu aucha haina?
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Thank you. Majjale aaucha ni nepali bolna. Tapailai pani Nepal bata ho?
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From Gangtok. Nice to meet you 🙂 Nepali bhetnu pauda khushi lagcha ni?
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Ahh lagi halcha ni. Its to meet you, Nepali bolne manche. Malai tapaile lekheko ni man parcha.
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Tyeso bhaye, kina comment nagare ko kahiley pani? Lol. Thank you Ankit
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Aba garchu ni hai, Nepali mai gsrchu.
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Yayyyy! 🙂
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Euta kura, you are just like me when it comes to writing, I mean katti dherai leknu hudo rahe cha. ki sab purano ho? I have like 40-50 poems., mero poems ko vault ma 🙂
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Yes I write a lot. Can’t stop. In one year I had written over 1000 poems last year. Mero debut book of poetry ma, 245 poems cha. Yo haru purano haina. And this is my 4th blog. 🙂
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Are you kidding me.?? That is a large number, its really sth that would be of next level to me. Ani I thought I write so much. Anyway, It was nice meeting you. Katti pachi koi sanga khulera boleko, so Im happy. 🙂
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Not kidding! Sacchi. It’s like can’t contain the poetry that flows/bleeds. Breathing it hau. Anyway, timi kata chau?
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Ma ni testai ho, ajai maile ta sth like dairy jasto lekhera 2 choti chyatera fayleko chu, Now I regret that move 😦
Im from kathmandu, tapai aauno bako cha yeta?
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Dhatt! Kina testo gareko? Poetry is your sacred conversations with yourself.
Of course, I have visited Ktm. Baba ko family sabai tyeha nai cha
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Maybe someday I’ll tell you about it. Whatever I write is my only getaway. Ani I think it applies to you too. you can read about me about me, mero blog ko intro section ma 🙂
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Huncha 🙂 nice to be connecting, Ankit. Keep writing, don’t worry about how much or how little.
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Pheri post gare. Lol. I’m incorrigible 😉
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Hare, yo comment section makes me sad. Edit garna ni kasto ka jana parne katti kura bigrreko rahe cha.
Lemme check.
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Wow, this is so beautiful
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Very happy to hear that, Im glad you enjoyed it.
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woww, this is my favorite of yours!
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Thanks for thar. Feels.good to know thst you liked it.
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Beautiful thoughts
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Thank you Rushda, I really appreciate it. 🙂
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Did you recently change your link to your profile? It says it isn’t available.
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No, I have not done anything like that. But you can access my work here: https://rushdas.wordpress.com/
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By the way, thank you for taking time to see my work. I appreciate your efforts.
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Just saw this, you have a nice blog.
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Thank you Ankit for your valuable feedback and with that ill keep myslf motivated.
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Im happy I did that.
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It’s beautiful 🙂
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Thanks for finding it beautiful 🙂
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I love this. 🙂
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Thanks for the love. 🙂
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When poems are written this beautifully, it makes you wonder if it’s a poem or a journal entry.
What you have written is just as gorgeous as the picture accompanying it.
I’ve felt this way many times over. It blows my mind how you were able to capture something so true so elegantly.
I love it.
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Its always nice finding someone sharing the same thought. I really appreciate you taking your time going through my poem, and for this motivating opinion.
I just tried writing what I was going through, this being my only way out. Im glad you liked it.
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If it’s that effortless, then you definitely have a gift.
And I truly enjoy your work. You are very welcome.
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It’s not all about effort, I think it’s also about the connection that you have with your mind and the soul. It really is that. And I’m pretty sure you’re aware of it.
Thank you for your interest on my work. It really means a lot. I’m grateful to have a genuine reader like you.
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The soul and mind is a connection that I cherish deeply. I always have and I yes I am very aware of how that is present in any form of creativity.
You are welcome. I can say the same to you. It’s a true pleasure to have a fellow expressionist not just read my work and comments but to find meaning and depth in them. Thank you as well.
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I’m glad you mentioned that, finding meaning in depth thing.
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Tugs at the heartstrings!
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Oh wow, Im reading this with a smile on my face. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Despite your deepest thoughts and your wounding paper swords
These words of yours are what I’d call a lover’s plea
To be understood between the lines, to be truly heard
And be loved for all that you are in your entirety!
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You render me speechless.
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And you give me words I didn’t know I had in me
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oh wow, really? For an excellent poet, such as you. That simply doesn’t make sense lols.
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Not everything has to make sense.
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Bujhne le kura nabhujhe pachi, mann ma kura naliye pachi…
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Ankit, if you love sonnets, check out Tony Harrison…
Good work…
Mike
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I’d be more than happily do that. You got links? I always welcome recommendations.
🙂
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Just search for Tony Harrison. I have recently blogged one of his fantastic longer poems (not a sonnet)…
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Just posted one of my poems…from long, long ago…
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I will definately see that once I get home.
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wonderful piece of writing
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Thanks for that. That was nice of you.
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Just being honest. 😉 When I read something I like..I say it. You’re welcome.
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Thanks again, I really appreciate it. 🙂
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This is incredible, I loved reading it.
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Im really thankful for that.
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Ankit, I’m glad I came here tonight. Your poetry is lovely.
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Me too, for your kind words. Thanks a lot. 🙂
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It is my pleasure 🙂
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Welcome to my blog. I hope you’ll visit again.
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Without a doubt. Thank you for the warm welcome!
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So much emotion conveyed here, along with the visuals really sets the scene. Amazing!
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Thank you so much Elle, It means a lot.
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It’s really beautiful!!! And that drawing on the top of the page is wonderful!!! WOW! Cheers! 🙂
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Thank you, it really means a lot.
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My pleasure!!! 🙂
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🙂
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Your blog contains a good collection of short poems. I loved all of them! This one was great👌
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Hi Abhishek, thank you man for tanking the time to visit my blog and my poetry. I appreciate it so much. That was something like a review. I’m really thankful fkr that. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Keep writing bro..
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🙂
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Beaitiful as always 💙💙
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Thank you Hanna. 🙂
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Beautiful 👌👌
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Thank you for reading my poetry 🙂
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My pleasure ☺
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🙂
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