Concealing Fate

A question not of if but of when
I remember laughing it off back then.
On a mission and safely hidden
This warrior within has been beaten.

Too much of it getting harder to hold.
On a warmer side, but it feels so cold.
A friend who would not let this hide,
For the rest saddest lines I write.

On this hour, I am one and I am all.
I’ve been falling, nobody understands this fall.
Brush past my racing body.
Once done, I’ll be nobody.

Of this life and of it’s crown.
With these waves, I will certainly drown.
The lies stacked and heavily fortified.
The truth struggles against this tide.

Damned I am, I am full of complaints
These mistakes have no amends.
I am a healer, Yet I can never be healed.
I express it on poetry, my lips are sealed.
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  1. Ohhhh gahd I love this. Esp this line: I am a healer, Yet I can never be healed.
    I express it on poetry, my lips are sealed.-this speaks to me the most. Well written! Great job Ankit Thapa ♥️

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      1. Ah I know the pain in silence. I understand. 🙂 We all wear smile bright enough to hide our tears. For a change I am trying to pour out everything and it helps. What you search is always inside you. ❤

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  2. ‘Being an empath is a double edged sword’ 😦 The other day I was thinking of writing something on a motivator who needs motivation. You have expressed it eloquently.

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      1. Ah….I like Your thoughts on that. I agree…they can be! God. For me, when I say crazy beautiful it means I REALLY like something….my heart and soul are deeply touched and my mind can’t find the words…that’s what crazy beautiful means for me. But I love what You said….it really is true! 🙂

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      2. I think I got that. The way you put your thoughts are crazy beautiful. 🙂
        You know I like the way you explain and express things. You do it in a unique way. I find it cute. it tells me so much abt you. 🙂

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    1. I see, I have been told that. I always write simple. It has been my style now. Btw, I have two styles of writing.
      About email, it happens with me too. I don’t get emails of certain bloggers. I have no idea about that. I”ll look into that and let you know. 🙂

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      1. I like your poetry, thank you for sharing it with me. I also like the unique background for each post. Keep it up. I have followed your blog, I’d love to follow you on instagram but I haven’t been on instagram in a while, for a year now to be specific. 🙂


      2. Thank you. Glad you liked it 🙂 Also, I appreciate the follow, hope I add value to your life through my work! And it’s okay regarding the Instagram thing, you can occasionally Google my page if you want to check up on my latest work. Best wishes! ✨🙌

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  3. Your beautiful words just made my day. Thank you so much for adding such magical drop of words in my jar of motivation.I feel blessed by your writing right now.
    I found delight love in what you just said in your post.
    Again such a beautiful write up on your blog.
    Keep the vibes on.

    Peace ✌and Love ❤

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    1. Oh thank you Patrick, that means so much, with that you motivated me. Thank you once again, you kind words are appreciated. Thank you for visiting me. Have a good time ahead Patrick. 🙂


      1. Thanks for replying me. This reply means alot to me.

        Such an awesome way of replying someone.
        Thanks. Again.

        You welcome dear friend.

        You can also check on my blog for the recent post and say your own views and contribution on it.
        I did a good post about “”” LET IT GO”””


        Peace ✌and Love ❤

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      2. It is always good to see you here Patrick. I’m glad that you visited me. You are so kind. You know I was reading your post “LET IT GO” and writing a comment there, I accidentally closed the tabs. I’ll do that again. 🙂


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