Hands of time
struck in line
mind wonder,
will you ever be mine?
Rofous nightingale
your voice it seems,
“Hello”, heart’s fly
“Goodbye”, heart’s sigh
worry not, I won’t pry.
Hark! Heart palpitating
skipping in an abnormal beat, pyrosis,
serotonin and dopamine so low,
into entropy, unusual flow.
In an ocean, waves of thought.
Left unchecked sure to rot.
Like anemia, complexion pale
frustration, bitterness and hopelessness prevail.
Cries in vain, refusing to see
Drinking life out of me.
Trickling of memories, scenes from my past,
like slipping sands in an hourglass.
Will tomorrow be the same drought
to this desert heart?
Bless the oasis you left
which shelters the thirsty souls,
surge of happy memories
etched on the sands of time.
-Graci and Ankit-
A collab I did with Graci, She is all about food, gardening. poetry and photography.
This photo was taken by her.
Surely, this is great.
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Hi MVS, Thank you for the appreciation. 🙂
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Always, Ankit.😊
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excellent poem! It does speak to me in many ways!
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Oh Im glad to hear that. 🙂
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It is an excellent write.
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Thank you Graci game with this idea. 🙂
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Cries in vain, refusing to see
Drinking life out of me. <———– Love these lines.
Will tomorrow be the same drought
to this desert heart? <———Another great set of lines.
Bravo to the two of you. Wonderful collab.
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How did you manage to catch us? You are an excellent observer.
Thank you Andrew. It was Graci’s concept btw.
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I try to be a good blogger and follow people faithfully. My pleasure reading this. Hope you guys do more
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I am aware of it. I know you are not only words. I like that the most about you. I am the same in a way. While doing so, some have appreciated, and the wisest have showered me with hate. This one is ironic. You remember my poem Ember right? One fine day I will share it with you. It was my worst WP experience.
And yes we will be doing more, we already have one other collab. I have been doing collab with one other friend. We have done like 5.
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Looking forward to reading the next collab. Would it be okay for me to follow your friend? Yes, we have talked about your experience with haters.. Me and Nandita are going through the same thing right now.
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hahah seriously?? You are asking me that? What have you been drinking lols. Just kidding. I am kinda out of words. She would be very happy to have someone like you on her list. I still dont understand, why would you ask me to follow her……
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I think I will take my story of hate to my grave. It actually helped me.
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I really love this Ankit, love the photo too. I will have to go visit Graci. 🙂
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you for the love Holly. Really kind of you to visit Graci.
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Beautiful collaboration, I didn’t find anywhere to leave a comment for Graci. Pass on my admiration for this lovely poetry.
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I will.
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😊
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Excellent work my friend.
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Thank you my friend 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Ankit, this is really beautiful^^, emotionally contagious. Would love to check Graci too^^, I am very into photography^^
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Thank you, and please do visit her. She’s a wonderful person.
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Ankit and Graci, this is crazy, wonderfully beautiful! Wow. Intense. And Graci, super cool photo. Cheers. 💖
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Thank you Katy for this super cool comment. There is always this smile on my face when I read your comment.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Awesome collab! Learnt something new – that you can do something like this.
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Haha Glad you learned that. 🙂
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The photo and the lines fit perfectly together. A great combo of love and sorrow. Well penned! You guys did a great job ♥️😍
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Yes, you are right. 🙂
It was Graci’s shot.
Thank you Rae for this beautiful comment. 🙂
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