You read, you write, you fail to connect,
I am the chapter you erased.
No meaning to these blank spaces.
For this character comfortably depressed.
For years these pages shall remain blank
No writer shall bring it back..
The impression on the pages of that golden plot.
The only evidence of our love.
I am the chapter you erased… ouch! How sad and true this is… beautifully penned tho, Ankit. ♥️
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Thank you Apple, hope you are doing well.
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Short but so much depth and it conveys so much!
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Thank you for reading Neel. 🙂
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I agree with Apple Rae. That was a powerful line. Good poem. Hoping you are well.
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Thank you Andrew, I appreciate your concerns, Im good, its just sometimes,
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I understand. Be well.
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God. That’s a powertrain. Cannon through the heart. So clear, concise and heartbreaking. ❤️
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Cannon through the heart, that is such a strong compliment.
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It’s true.
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Some really beautiful lines and images here, Ankit.
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Thank you Isha. 🙂
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😉
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Oh you are back again.
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yes
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Cool
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Beautifully written
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Thank you
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wonderfully written. Open to many interpretations.
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Thank you for reading.
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So beautifully expressed, Ankit! 🙂
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Thanks Neha 🙂
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You’re welcome, Ankit! 🙂
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This is very, very good, Ankit. The chapter must have been written with purpose and definition and strength for the impression to remain even after the words have been erased.
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Oh you concluded that neatly. 🙂
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Beautiful poetry ❤
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thank you.
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How simple and powerful^^. Very good job.
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Thank you Antsa.
Seeing you after some months, where had you been. I hope everything is well. And its good to see you.
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Thanks Ankit, I am glad to be back too. I was on a mission in a small island for 3 months working with the humpback whales as it was the season. It was an amazing experience I would love to share later on wordpress. Now it s hard to get back on wordpress, I missed it but it s hard for me to write now.
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I see, wow that sounds like so much fun. I hope you had a memorable one.
Will you have this experience on your travel blog?
For writing once you find the track you’ll be back in no time.
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I hope to write about it soon yes but I have got so many things to finish in such a short period now. I am already back on the road from next week but I hope to have internet where I go so I can stay on wordpress
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My best wishes on all of your endeavors.
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Thank you Ankit^^
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This is lit.
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Thank you
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